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Thursday, June 18, 2020

Dark Galaxy Town

Once upon a time in a dark galaxy town, there was a young boy called Bronson who loved exploring. So he decided to go for a walk around the town at 12:30pm. He grabbed his rain    jacket, his torch and his beanie and quietly sneaked out the door so his mum and dad don't wake up. Bronson has been walking around 30 minutes now and you're crossing the bridge of the lake in the town. No one really knows what is on the other side of the bridge because it's a long bridge and it’s really damaged. You walk over the bridge and walk through a mini forest to see a huge water with a huge bird flying over him. It was scaly and slimy and it sounded like a train horn. You walk up to it to give it a pat bit it refuses to come near you. You finally sneak up to him and give a little pat but it only lasted 10 seconds before he flies off again, but this time he didn't stop flying. He’s going and he's trying to catch up with him but he’s too fast you run and you run across the bridge up the hill to your house and see that the huge feathery beast was in your house holding your baby sister. You wake and realise it was a dream…..

1 comment:

  1. Hey Maz My blogging buddy Nice work i loved it i wish i could read it everyday i liked how you write at the start Once upon a time in a dark galaxy town i love
    Keep up the good work\
    From George

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